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ED1421 Foundations of Language and Literacy in Education: Essay Exemplar

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Below is a sample of an introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion and reference list from a previous student essay that varies from current year requirements. The essay was awarded a HD according to the marking criteria and standards in that year. The speech bubbles below include feedback and comments from the lecturer, a librarian and learning advisor.

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Assignment task instructions image. Task description Unpacking the essay question

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Synthesis definition: Combine (a number of things) into a coherent whole; draw together ideas (similar and sometimes contradictory ideas of others)

Using evidence Evidence and systhesis Evidence of synthesis
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We acknowledge the Australian Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander peoples as the first inhabitants of the nation and acknowledge Traditional Owners of the lands where our staff and students, live, learn and work.Acknowledgement of Country